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Author: Subject: FINAL QUERY--Opinions needed.
Wil
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[*] posted on 7/5/2010 at 04:32 PM
FINAL QUERY--Opinions needed.


Final Query- Most people seem to think this is my most clear and concise Query so far, but does it hook you to read on?
Thanks in advance.

Dear…

Fifteen-year-old Evan Umbra is a demon hunter in training.
Veneseron Fortress is where he and others his age hone and harness their magical talents and weaponry skills. Their job is to embark out on missions throughout the thousands of bizarre and fantastical realms, hunting demons and destroying evil.

But Evan Umbra holds a grave secret. He is a demon spawn, the key to the demon god’s rebirth. This god’s minions have never stopped serving him, and they wish to sacrifice Evan to bring their Master back. Evan also realises that not all his magical powers are good-- he possesses dark magic which he can’t control. Evan must hide these newfound abilities from everyone, whilst trying not to let them consume him.

Evan just wants to fit in at Veneseron, to complete his training and keep his loved ones safe from harm. But the demons turn to attacking his friend and girlfriend just to get at him. He is a demon hunter yet his powers are demoniac. When a demon army invades the fortress he thinks he must give himself up, or all and everyone he’s ever cared about will be destroyed.

DEMON HUNT- is an 84,000 word YA, fantasy novel. The complete manuscript is available at your request. Thank you for taking the time to consider my work.

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