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What is Your Opinion in My Writing Style (Help)


Hello, my name is Ali, I'm writing in my own website that talking about home decoration ideas but I'm just a beginner and English in not my main language, Could you help me? what is your opinion in this post 7 Steps to Choose Best Kids Bedroom Furniture:
http://www.decorsector.com/kids-bedroom-furniture/

Just tell me if there are any mistakes.

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[*] posted on 4/7/2016 at 11:10 AM


Can't tell if serious or spam. Mistakes are everywhere, but the site looks nice. :)



I seemed to be looking down from an immense height upon a twilit grotto, knee-deep with filth, where a white-bearded daemon swineherd drove about with his staff a flock of fungous, flabby beasts whose appearance filled me with unutterable loathing.

Just keep writing and the good stuff will come.
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[*] posted on 4/7/2016 at 06:20 PM


There are a lot of ESL mistakes in the text. We'd be happy to help you learn if you're REALLY interested in learning to write better... are you really interested or are you just wanting to leave your links around?




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[*] posted on 4/10/2016 at 09:55 AM


Quote: Originally posted by Skwerly  
Can't tell if serious or spam. Mistakes are everywhere, but the site looks nice. :)


Thanks for feed back, I'm trying to do my best.
Can you mention some of this mistakes?




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[*] posted on 4/10/2016 at 10:02 AM


Quote: Originally posted by Michy  
There are a lot of ESL mistakes in the text. We'd be happy to help you learn if you're REALLY interested in learning to write better... are you really interested or are you just wanting to leave your links around?


Thanks for your beautiful words, I'm so glad for your reply.
Could you please help me to write better?

Just tell me if my link bothering you guys and I wouldn't leave it again.




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[*] posted on 4/11/2016 at 01:02 PM


No, it's okay if you're really wanting to learn to write better. I don't want you to put links here for spamming or trying to sell things... but if you're really wanting to learn to write better, we can work with that.

Give me a bit, and I'll help you out some.




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[*] posted on 4/12/2016 at 06:51 AM


Michy is great at helping people. I might mention in the meantime that one good thing to do might be to read a lot of things written in English. Magazines, articles, novels, non-fiction. Anything. It would help you to 'hear' in your head what sounds right in English and what doesn't.



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[*] posted on 4/12/2016 at 08:28 AM


Quote: Originally posted by Michy  
No, it's okay if you're really wanting to learn to write better. I don't want you to put links here for spamming or trying to sell things... but if you're really wanting to learn to write better, we can work with that.

Give me a bit, and I'll help you out some.


Thanks again Michy, take your time I'm waiting for you :) ...




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[*] posted on 4/12/2016 at 08:33 AM


Quote: Originally posted by Nancy G.  
Michy is great at helping people. I might mention in the meantime that one good thing to do might be to read a lot of things written in English. Magazines, articles, novels, non-fiction. Anything. It would help you to 'hear' in your head what sounds right in English and what doesn't.


Thanks, I'll do that :)





                              

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